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Essay |
A piece of writing that
gives your thoughts (commentary) about a subject. All essays you will write will have at
least five paragraphs: an introduction, three body paragraphs, and a
concluding paragraph. |
Persuasive writing, the
focus of this course, attempts to convince the reader that what you think
about the topic matters and should be deeply considered. |
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PARTS OF THE ESSAY |
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Introduction (Also called
the introductory paragraph) |
The first paragraph in an
essay. |
It includes introductory
information and the thesis, most often at the end |
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Thesis |
A sentence with a subject
and opinion (also called commentary). |
In more advanced and
complex writing, a thesis may be several sentences, even paragraphs. You will receive additional
detailed information about thesis statements later in the unit. |
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Body Paragraph |
A middle paragraph in an
essay. |
It develops a point you
want to make that supports your thesis. |
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Topic Sentence |
The first sentence in a
body paragraph. This sentence must
have a subject and opinion (commentary) for the paragraph. |
A topic sentence does the
same thing for a paragraph that the thesis does for the essay. |
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Concrete Detail (CD) |
Specific details form the
backbone or core of your body paragraphs. |
Synonyms for concrete
details include facts, specifics, examples, support, descriptions,
illustrations, proof, evidence, quotations, paraphrasing, and plot
references. (KNOW THESE) |
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Commentary (CM) |
Your opinion or comment
about something. |
Synonyms for commentary
include opinion, insight, analysis, interpretation, inference, personal
response, feelings, evaluation, application, relevance, explication, and
reflection. (KNOW THESE) |
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Chunk |
One sentence of concrete
detail and two sentences of commentary.
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A chunk is the smallest
unified group of thoughts you can write. |
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Concluding Sentence |
The last sentence in a body
paragraph. It is all commentary. |
Do not repeat key words. It gives a finished feeling to the
paragraph and may help transition to the next paragraph. |
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PARTS OF THE ESSAY (continued) |
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Concluding Paragraph (Also called the
conclusion) |
The last paragraph in your
essay. It may sum up your ideas, reflect
on what you said in your essay, add
commentary about the subject or give
a personal statement about the subject (but not one unsupported by the
body of the essay). |
Conclusions generally do
not include concrete details and do not repeat key words from your paper –
especially not from your thesis and introductory paragraph. It gives a finished feeling to the
essay. In persuasive writing, it
explains the relevance of the subject and the reason your view on the subject
is vital to consider. |
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STEPS IN THE WRITING PROCESS: |
Some writers simply begin
writing (drafting). However, this too
is a form of pre-writing. Following the
draft, a good writer will pick their own writing apart and either shape it or
use a graphic organizer (thinking map) before beginning again. These
steps may be jumbled and repeated, but none should be excluded. |
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Pre-Writing |
The process of getting
concrete details down on paper before organizing an essay into paragraphs. |
Forms of pre-writing
include Thought Exercises, daily writing prompts and thinking maps (e.g.,
bubble clusters, spider diagrams, outlines, columns, Venn diagrams, flow
charts, brainstorm lists). |
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Shaping |
The step that begins the
organization of the essay. |
Create an outline of the
thesis, topic sentences, concrete details, and commentary ideas. |
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First Draft |
The first version of the
organized essay. |
Also called the rough
draft. |
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Peer Response |
Written responses and
reactions to another’s paper. |
Also called peer
review. Peer review may also be verbal
during in-class workshops |
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Revision |
The process of considering
and incorporating peer suggestions for improvement. |
This step should be
repeated several times. In the latter
stages, it may also include incorporating the instructor’s feedback and
specific attention to all of the six-trait areas. |
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Final Draft |
The final version of the
essay. |
This typically occurs when
it’s time to move on to a new project or topic because almost every essay can
be continually improved. I encourage
students to continually revise and resubmit their work as much as they
wish. REMEMBER: WRITING IS THINKING – WRITING IS REWRITING
– REWRITING IS RETHINKING |